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shayne07 said: Unite
God send me an angel before its too late Before my lonely bitterness seals my fate Before time has passed me by I pray you show me love before i die My untethered loneliness runs abound My lost soul desperate to be found To find something tender to find something pure From this perpetual confusion the cure Too often i put my faith in something that's wrong Always i let it continue too long To the point i dont know what to do To the point i question what was true I m never on a winner It has me thinking i m a sinner Am i being punished for whats inside Are my desires just suicide God if your there take control Show me what will bring peace to my soul Make this man be at one Unite everything that has come undone I love the way you structure your poems... this one is no exception....nice. | |
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thanks 4 your continued input mate , its much appreciated .. have a good 1 | |
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I love a poem that challenges.
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tony23k said: I love a poem that challenges.
Poems that have a solid message. Yet somehow take on new meaning everytime you read them. Your poems have that quality. Here, here... "People used to attack me and say it was a conflict of interest: I was the manager, I was the record company, I was the publisher, and I would say, Yes, of course, conflict of interest, but it’s in their favor, you stupid fuck." - Berry Gordy | |
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Great comments , yet again i can only say thank you | |
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