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Thread started 03/10/08 5:51am

shayne07

Unite by shayne

Unite

God send me an angel before its too late
Before my lonely bitterness seals my fate
Before time has passed me by
I pray you show me love before i die

My untethered loneliness runs abound
My lost soul desperate to be found
To find something tender to find something pure
From this perpetual confusion the cure

Too often i put my faith in something that's wrong
Always i let it continue too long
To the point i dont know what to do
To the point i question what was true

I m never on a winner
It has me thinking i m a sinner
Am i being punished for whats inside
Are my desires just suicide

God if your there take control
Show me what will bring peace to my soul
Make this man be at one
Unite everything that has come undone

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Reply #1 posted 03/15/08 7:12pm

tony23k

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shayne07 said:

Unite

God send me an angel before its too late
Before my lonely bitterness seals my fate
Before time has passed me by
I pray you show me love before i die

My untethered loneliness runs abound
My lost soul desperate to be found
To find something tender to find something pure
From this perpetual confusion the cure

Too often i put my faith in something that's wrong

Always i let it continue too long
To the point i dont know what to do
To the point i question what was true

I m never on a winner
It has me thinking i m a sinner
Am i being punished for whats inside
Are my desires just suicide

God if your there take control
Show me what will bring peace to my soul
Make this man be at one
Unite everything that has come undone


I love the way you structure your poems...
this one is no exception....nice.

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Reply #2 posted 03/19/08 10:02am

shayne07

thanks 4 your continued input mate , its much appreciated .. have a good 1

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Reply #3 posted 03/21/08 7:44am

tony23k

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I love a poem that challenges.
Poems that have a solid message.
Yet somehow take on new meaning everytime you read them.

Your poems have that quality.

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Reply #4 posted 03/21/08 11:35am

Slave2daGroove

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tony23k said:

I love a poem that challenges.
Poems that have a solid message.
Yet somehow take on new meaning everytime you read them.

Your poems have that quality.



Here, here...


clapping nice work

"People used to attack me and say it was a conflict of interest: I was the manager, I was the record company, I was the publisher, and I would say, Yes, of course, conflict of interest, but it’s in their favor, you stupid fuck." - Berry Gordy
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Reply #5 posted 03/25/08 3:51am

shayne07

Great comments , yet again i can only say thank you

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