New song - heartache built for 2

http://www.icompositions....?sid=99985

Let me know what you think. I need a little constructive criticism on this one.

Thanks!




[Edited 11/14/08 18:32pm]

I made a new mix...

Well, the constructive criticism won't come from me, I just listen

I really love the harmonica....I have a friend who has one, but I don't
really know if he plays it.

"Heartache built for two".....nuthin' like carrying the whole load...dang.

Now I'll turn this over to the folks with their constructive criticism

obsessed said:

Well, the constructive criticism won't come from me, I just listen

I really love the harmonica....I have a friend who has one, but I don't
really know if he plays it.

"Heartache built for two".....nuthin' like carrying the whole load...dang.

Now I'll turn this over to the folks with their constructive criticism